Template:Did you know nominations/Margarete Bieber

Margarete Bieber

 * ... that Bieber studied ancient Roman clothing styles before moving to the United States?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/William Robinson Brown

Created/expanded by Gobonobo (talk). Self nom at 06:09, 30 August 2012 (UTC)
 * ALT1:... that Margarete Bieber was the second woman to become a University professor in Germany?
 * ALT2:... that Bieber was named to the American Academy of Arts and Sciences in 1970?
 * ALT3:... that Bieber studied ancient Greek clothing styles before moving to the United States?
 * ALT4:... that Bieber was named to the American Academy of Arts and Sciences in the early 1970s?


 * Maile66 (talk) 00:28, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Gobonobo, I'm having a little problem on the hooks:
 * Original hook - Nothing in the article mentions Roman clothing or costumes. There's a sentence in the article about Greek costumes, but you've sourced it with Ref 2 and Ref 3, neither of which mention clothing or costumes
 * Alt 1 hook is fine, and sourced at the end of the sentence
 * Alt 2 hook - I find in Ref 3 that the year should be 1971.  You sourced it with Ref 1, which doesn't mention the Academy.
 * Maile66 (talk) 01:00, 14 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Original hook - I've struck this one and added ALT3 which names Greek clothing instead. Ref 3 on page 56 says "her dissertation examined the history of tragic costume in Greek art"
 * Alt 2 hook - I meant to refer to the PDF for the 1971 Academy date, but I now see that one says 1970 while the other has 1971. I've struck Alt 2 and added an Alt 4 that just reads "early 1970s".
 * Gobōnobo + c 01:56, 14 September 2012 (UTC)

Or...am I just not seeing something I should? Maile66 (talk) 11:05, 14 September 2012 (UTC) Disregard that comment. I finally found the reference for Atl 3, where you had it all along. Maile66 (talk) 11:21, 14 September 2012 (UTC)


 * The following has been checked in this review by Maile66
 * QPQ done by Gobonobo on August 30, 2012
 * Article created by Gobonobo on August 30, 2012 and has 4,688 characters of readable prose
 * NPOV, well written, well sourced
 * Every paragraph sourced
 * Hooks Alt 1, Alt 3 and Alt 4 are interesting, short enough, and sourced at the end of their sentences
 * Duplication Detector run, no copyvio found

Good to go. Nice find on this pioneer in the arts, education and archaeology. Maile66 (talk) 11:54, 14 September 2012 (UTC)