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Mary Clive, Lady Pansy Lamb

 * ... that Lady Mary and her sister Pansy had few childhood friends as they wore such out-of-date clothes?
 * Reviewed: Premio Lo Nuestro 1990, KUNSTEN Museum of Modern Art Aalborg

Created by Gareth E Kegg (talk), Moonraker (talk). Nominated by Gareth E Kegg (talk) at 01:17, 6 September 2013 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg Both articles about remarkable women, are adequately sourced using inline citations, nominated well within time limit. Hook is cited in both articles. To be honest I'm not sure whether I'm missing something - has this nom been overlooked for a particular reason? It's a shame Lady Pansy Lamb was not nominated separately, as she was subject of a John Betjeman poem, a far more interesting fact in my view! However, as it stands, the current hook has enough curiosity. It needs rewording, however, to fully identify the subjects. I would suggest
 * ALT1: ... that Lady Mary Clive (n&eacute;e Pakenham) and her sister Lady Pansy had few childhood friends as they wore such out-of-date clothes? Sionk (talk) 19:59, 9 October 2013 (UTC)
 * That's an improvement, and I concur with your thoughts on Pansy, I do sometimes despise reducing great lives to a weird "hook". Thank you. Gareth E Kegg (talk) 21:22, 9 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Okay, good to go with ALT 1. Sionk (talk) 22:17, 9 October 2013 (UTC)