Template:Did you know nominations/Maternal sensitivity

Maternal sensitivity
Created/expanded by Carina1205 (talk), R-Bot6 (talk), 1StrangerSC (talk). Nominated by Carina1205 (talk) at 19:43, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * ... that children of maternally sensitive mothers scored higher in math and phoneme knowledge than those who had a history of lower maternal sensitivity?


 * Can the hook be properly formatted so it is clear what article we're reviewing here? --LauraHale (talk) 06:42, 14 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol possible vote.svg Article is not fully supported by inline citations.
 * Symbol question.svg As this article is subject to WP:MEDRS, can the PMID's be added to the sources? --LauraHale (talk) 06:44, 14 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Hello, I changed the hook to something different which contained the words "maternal sensitivity". Also, I am not sure what you mean by the article is not supported by inline citations? Everything in the article comes from a somewhere else which is sourced at the end of the last sentence from that source. As for the PMID's, I added the codes for the ones I found. Thank you very much. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Carina1205 (talk • contribs) 16:34, 14 July 2012 (UTC)

--

Hook still not properly formatted. Article still not fully supported by sources. The unpublished dissertation is not an acceptable source in a medical article. There are a number of raw URLs in the citation list that need to go. There is at least one source that appears to be a primary source medical study where the section pretty much exclusively talks about it, not how others responded to it. No PMID in the citation. Appears to be other possible WP:MEDRS sourcing issues. This is not ready. When ALL these concerns are addressed, please comment HERE AND on my talk page. --LauraHale (talk) 20:06, 14 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Not sure how the hook is still improperly formatted after it's recent revisions. Citations have been created/modified where requested. Improper referencing issue has been addressed. R-Bot6 (talk) 04:14, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

Sourcing now appears to be reliable and, based on my understanding of WP:MEDRS, compliant. (I have asked a medical person to verify.) Hook is properly formatted. Hooked fact is found in the article and supported by a source. I think it is good to go. --LauraHale (talk) 04:23, 15 July 2012 (UTC)