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Mohan Singh Bisht

 * ... that Bharatiya Janata Party politician and Member of the Delhi Legislative Assembly Mohan Singh Bisht "loves" watching religious soap operas?
 * Reviewed: Women Side by Side

Created by Bill william compton (talk). Self nominated at 07:06, 15 November 2013 (UTC).


 * ALT1 ... that Bharatiya Janata Party politician and Member of the Delhi Legislative Assembly Mohan Singh Bisht enjoys sports like football and kabaddi? ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛  Talk Email 10:48, 23 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol question.svg Article is new enough, long enough, well-referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. The original hook is very catchy; hook ref verified. QPQ done. I added some cites to statements that need them, including the hook cite, but the statement made about his not losing an election since 1998 (cited both in the lead and the body of the article) doesn't have a reference. I also found the section Political Career difficult to follow. The presentation seems to jump from his coming to Delhi, to his never losing an election, to his starting to win elections, to an accusation filed against him, to his running in 2013. It would be better to add topic sub-subheads to sort out (1) his election results, (2) his affiliations, (3) accusations, (4) current activities. I also don't understand what "contested" means. And how can he live at Dayal Pur Extension in North East Delhi if his house was demolished? Maybe you should say "his house at the time" was demolished? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 22:10, 5 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. Please revisit the article. undefined — Bill william compton  Talk   07:55, 6 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Thank you, that's much clearer. Hook ref verified. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 12:14, 6 December 2013 (UTC)