Template:Did you know nominations/Murder of Ng Yuk Tim

Murder of Ng Yuk Tim

 * ... that preparations for cosplay led to the death of a Malaysian teenager?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Culture of the Cook Islands

Created by Bonkers The Clown (talk). Self nominated at 13:26, 25 October 2013 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg - article passes as to length, newness, quality, but a slight problem with the hook. The article and sources say she was going to make a costume, not actual cosplay. Thus the hook is slightly misleading/inaccurate. If you insert "preparations for" before cosplay that would take care of it, or perhaps "that making a costume led ..." would work. Aboutmovies (talk) 07:43, 26 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Done. ☯ Bonkers The Clown  \(^_^)/  Nonsensical Babble  ☯ 09:24, 26 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg All good. Though more hooky hook would be "... that making costumes can get you killed? But that might be insensitive. Aboutmovies (talk) 15:52, 26 October 2013 (UTC)
 * But I actually like it! Sure, we must respect the deceased, but, well, sure sounds hooky in a fun way. Heheheh. ☯ Bonkers The Clown  \(^_^)/  Nonsensical Babble  ☯ 07:05, 27 October 2013 (UTC)