Template:Did you know nominations/Murder of Simon Dale


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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:11, 29 April 2018 (UTC)

Murder of Simon Dale

 * ... that the murder of Simon Dale might have left gold bars worth £12 million unaccounted for? Source: "30 gold bars, each 18 inches long, total value £12m" + others
 * ALT1:... that the murder of Simon Dale is one of West Mercia Constabulary's relatively few unsolved murders? Source: "one of West Mercia Constabulary's relatively few unsolved murders"
 * ALT2:... that the unsolved murder of Simon Dale led to successful fraud charges? Source: "How the death of an eccentric architect revealed a web of murder, fraud and intrigue" + others
 * Reviewed: Manu Bhaker

Created by Violetriga (talk). Self-nominated at 13:21, 24 March 2018 (UTC).


 * I'm unsure if "might have" is redundant in the original hook. violet/riga [talk] 13:22, 24 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Symbol confirmed.svg New, in time, long enough, sourced, inline hook citations check out, no apparent copyvios, QPQ done., I would suggest you describe Dale as English in the lead, and make a point of stating where the murder took place; the West Mercia Police are mentioned (but where's that?), and almost as an afterthought, but there's nothing else in the lead. --Usernameunique (talk) 00:09, 31 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Symbol question.svg Hi, I came by to promote this, but I agree with that the lead needs to be fleshed out. You might also add Template:Infobox person with details of the murder. Yoninah (talk) 21:52, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
 * I've further expanded the lead and added an infobox. violet/riga [talk] 22:25, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Thank you. Restoring tick. Yoninah (talk) 22:51, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Symbol question.svg Back again. If there's no evidence that the gold bars even existed, I don't think we should go with this hook. Let's think of something else that's verified. How about:
 * ALT3: ... that Simon Dale lived in only one room and the kitchen of his 50-room Hopton Heath mansion, where he was found bludgeoned to death in 1987? Yoninah (talk) 23:05, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
 * I think that we're covered with that wording but I'm happy to go with ALT3 if that's your preference. violet/riga [talk] 23:15, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg OK. We need another reviewer for ALT3, and then the promoter can decide. Pinging . Yoninah (talk) 23:23, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Symbol question.svg Thanks for looking at this, ., first, linking to a Google Group isn't great. The original source is archived here, and should be linked (and referenced) as such. Second, saying he "only" lived in two rooms is too strong. The source says "Dale lived mainly in the kitchen, sleeping upstairs in a four-poster bed. The rest of the house was half-empty". The hook should be qualified slightly (e.g., Simon Dale spent most of his time in one room...) to reflect the source. --Usernameunique (talk) 01:38, 22 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for finding the archive link - I'm much happier using that as the source. violet/riga [talk] 09:44, 22 April 2018 (UTC)
 * How about:
 * ALT3b: ... that Simon Dale lived mainly in one room and the kitchen of his 50-room Hopton Heath mansion, where he was found bludgeoned to death?
 * I still like ALT0 but this works. violet/riga [talk] 09:44, 22 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Symbol question.svg Where is this holding? are you going to approve it? Yoninah (talk) 23:10, 28 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Thanks for the ping . Added an inline citation, so this is all set. --Usernameunique (talk) 02:08, 29 April 2018 (UTC)