Template:Did you know nominations/Mutilator

Mutilator
Created by Blackmetalbaz (talk). Nominated by Malconfort (talk) at 17:08, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
 * ... that Mutilator appeared after Desaster?


 * Symbol possible vote.svg Article looks okay, but that's a really really bad hook. It's so ungrammatical as to be difficult to understand. And even when corrected, "Mutilator first appeared using the name Desaster" is just... bleh. DS (talk) 13:25, 25 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Can I use the phrase: "... that Mutilator was described as an excellent case study in DIY ethics?"--Malconfort (talk) 00:21, 26 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes, that's better. Make sure to link it from the article. DS (talk) 01:29, 26 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Done.--Malconfort (talk) 01:36, 26 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg DS (talk) 11:24, 26 April 2012 (UTC)