Template:Did you know nominations/Mutiny at Sucro

Mutiny at Sucro
Created/expanded by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self nom at 13:42, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
 * ... that ancient scholars considered the Mutiny at Sucro the most important event of Scipio Africanus' early military career?
 * Reviewed: St James' Church, Daisy Hill


 * I'd change "consider" to "considered" in the hook to clarify that you're referring to people who actually lived in antiquity (rather than present-day oldsters). I'd also lose the unnecessary "as". Deor (talk) 16:50, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Changed hook per Deor's suggestion.--Doug Coldwell talk 18:15, 4 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Symbol question.svg Most of the article has the citations at the end of the paragraph they support. Could you put them at the end of the sentences/information supported? AGF on offline sources, online sources are PD or behind paywall. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:57, 12 September 2011 (UTC)


 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell talk 15:55, 13 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Good to go! Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:51, 13 September 2011 (UTC)