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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:50, 9 February 2017 (UTC)

Naqsh Lyallpuri

 * ... that Naqsh Lyallpuri, Indian ghazal and Bollywood lyricist, adopted his last name from his birth place? Source: "He later adopted his pen name (takhkhallus) Naqsh and added ‘Lyallpuri’ to it in adherence with the tradition of Urdu Shayari to be identified by the town one belonged to." (Source)
 * Reviewed: TBD Yamuna Eri

Created by Dharmadhyaksha (talk). Nominated by Vivvt (talk) at 09:10, 26 January 2017 (UTC).




 * Sorry but that's like explaining a joke. Proposing ALT2 as below. §§ Dharmadhyaksha §§ {Talk / Edits} 19:16, 2 February 2017 (UTC)
 * ALT2... that following the tradition of Urdu poets, Bollywood lyricist Naqsh Lyallpuri adopted his last name from his birthplace, which was later also adopted by his family?
 * "which later his family also followed", I find that phrase a bit confusing, try to reword. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 14:10, 7 February 2017 (UTC)
 * How about "and also adopted by his family?" - Vivvt ( Talk ) 14:56, 7 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Please present the entire sentence before I pass. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 15:12, 7 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Tweaked. Please check now. - Vivvt ( Talk ) 15:27, 7 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg GTG with ALT2. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 15:16, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your review. - Vivvt ( Talk ) 15:55, 9 February 2017 (UTC)