Template:Did you know nominations/Pasaleng Bay

Pasaleng Bay

 * ... that whale watching brings tourists and conservationists to Pasaleng Bay (pictured) in the Philippines?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Patricia Roberts (basketball)

Created by Nvvchar (talk), Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 04:24, 17 July 2013 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg interesting article on good sources. Article: I feel that the fishing details are too much for a lead, read before anything about the geography, a summary would be better. The whales: both hook and article might stress that whales there are unusual, no? "Ghosts": I understand that the people used to believe that ghosts were singing, when they heard the sounds of the whales. Hook: I could imagine something about whales in the folk tales, as a bit more unusual. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:09, 19 July 2013 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review. I have shifted the fishing details to a separate section retaining only the gist in the lead. I am proposing the ALT1 Hook as below.


 * ALT1 Hook ... that according to local folklore whales, which regularly visit  the Pasaleng Bay (pictured) during the Holy Week are heard more as singing of a ghost, and ushered a good fish catch?
 * Too much of a good thing.
 * ALT2: ... that according to local folklore at Pasaleng Bay (pictured), visiting whales bring in more fish catch? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:59, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
 * ALT2 hOOK is fine. Thanks.-- Nvvchar . 02:03, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg ALT2 and original, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 05:48, 21 July 2013 (UTC)