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Patrick Omameh

 * ... that Patrick Omameh (pictured) began his Michigan Wolverines football career as the lowest rated football player in the 24-man entering class of 2008 and finished it as a 2012 first team All-Big Ten selection?
 * Reviewed: 6th QPQ of 9 against Template:Did you know nominations/Champaner-Pavagadh Archaeological Park

Created/expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nom at 17:23, 27 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Symbol question.svg This is not a full review, just a quick one. The hook is too long (209 characters), this should be under 200 characters per WP:Hook. Zia Khan 04:41, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Without the characters for "(pictured)" it is below 200.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:45, 28 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Here's a slightly shorter (172 characters) alt 1 hook that I'd offer up to Tony ... ... that Patrick Omameh (pictured) began his Michigan football career as the lowest rated player in the incoming class of 2008 and finished it as a 2012 first-team All-Big Ten selection? Cbl62 (talk) 06:53, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
 * I'd prefer to include 24-man as follows.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 08:26, 28 November 2012 (UTC)


 * (ALT2) ... that Patrick Omameh (pictured) began his Michigan football career as the lowest rated player in the 24-man incoming class of 2008 and finished it as a 2012 first-team All-Big Ten selection?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 08:26, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Pictogram voting keep.svg New article, length's good, image is OK, QPQ done. I would go for ALT 1. Zia Khan 12:54, 28 November 2012 (UTC)