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Polish nationalism

 * ... that over time Polish nationalism grew to be much more restrictive in terms of ethnicity and religion than the old Polish-Lithuanian identity it originated from?
 * Reviewed: Bandit (Yomiuriland)

Created by Piotrus (talk), R-41 (talk). Nominated by Piotrus (talk) at 09:35, 23 September 2013 (UTC).


 * Symbol possible vote.svg, but please specify whether it was 5x expanded or not and there are a few typos. Clean them up otherwise its good to go.  Sohambanerjee1998  13:46, 23 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Piotrus, the article is 5x expanded though its stated that its created by you two, Typos and few grammar mistakes are there though I don't know whether it was just like that it the source since I am don't know much about the topic, for example oftheir -> of their etc. You are the article creators therefore I advice you to copy-edit it.  Sohambanerjee1998  14:01, 23 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Plus please give me the name of the reference from where you are citing the hook.  Sohambanerjee1998  14:03, 23 September 2013 (UTC)
 * C/e done. Refs should be clear in text; should support the hook, if not, see other refs in the paragraphs dealing with ethnicity and religion - they should be accessible online. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here  03:47, 24 September 2013 (UTC)
 * The reference supports along with other ones. So no issues there.  Sohambanerjee1998  13:33, 26 September 2013 (UTC)

Check points: Other than the hook its GTG.  Sohambanerjee1998  14:30, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Created or Expanded 5x - ✅
 * Image - Not used.
 * Prose Size - ✅, 481 words, readable prose size
 * QPQ - ✅, not much to say here.
 * Neutral, close paraphrasing, unsourced - ✅
 * Hook - 171 words, umm needs shortening plus its a negative one moreover its long and not interesting enough.


 * ALT1 ... that Polish nationalism is more restrictive in terms of ethnicity and religion than the earlier Polish-Lithuanian identity? Just boiled down. Johnbod (talk) 15:08, 9 October 2013 (UTC)


 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Needs review of ALT1. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:19, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg ALT1 hook looks good; I just changed "became" to "is". Hook ref verified. Newness, length, refs and QPQ already approved above. I just did a little more copyediting and wikifying, and do not see any grammatical or copyediting issues. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:09, 30 October 2013 (UTC)