Template:Did you know nominations/Radlock Trainer

Radlock Trainer
Created/expanded by TSRL (talk). Nominated by The Bushranger (talk) at 22:33, 4 November 2011 (UTC)
 * ... that the Radlock Trainer was built by members of the Hull Experimental Gliding Club in their spare time?


 * Symbol question.svg Length and creation timing are good. AGF on citations to off-line source. Hook goes a bit beyond (i.e., "in their spare time") what is stated in article. Several cited statements are the editor's descriptions of items shown in photos, which may be approaching OR. Only cited statement in Operational history section does not seem to be supported by the cited source. -- Donald Albury 13:53, 18 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Tweaked the History cite, and I'll ping the original author. Meanwhile... - The Bushranger One ping only 20:05, 18 November 2011 (UTC)
 * The Operational history section is very short, and can probably be dropped if it can't be sourced. ALT1 is fine, if not very sexy. I don't think there's much chance of getting a sexy hook out of this article. -- Donald Albury 20:36, 18 November 2011 (UTC)


 * ALT1: ... that the Radlock Trainer was built by members of the Hull Experimental Gliding Club in their workshop?


 * I had omitted a ref in the history section, first two sentences. Included now.TSRL (talk) 20:45, 18 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg - I'm satisfied. Ready to go. -- Donald Albury 00:05, 21 November 2011 (UTC)