Template:Did you know nominations/Rama tapaniya Upanishad


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The result was: promoted by  Jolly  Ω   Janner  09:48, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

Rama tapaniya Upanishad

 * ... that the Rama tapaniya Upanishad states Hindu god Rama (pictured) is same as the Atman (soul) and Brahman (ultimate reality)?


 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Fatima Massaquoi

Created by Nvvchar (talk) and Ms Sarah Welch (talk). Nominated by Nvvchar (talk) at 06:11, 15 February 2016 (UTC).


 * Symbol confirmed.svg New enough, long enough, hook short enough, sourced properly, qpq done, Earwig does not flag problems, tone neutral, image checks out.


 * Symbol question.svg However, content needs to be a touch more readable.  I would suggest on more copyedit before prime time, there are some awkward phrasings such as "Upanishads attached the Atharvaveda," or "In contrast, Catherine Ludvik – a professor at the Stanford University and an author of books on Hindu deities, however, "


 * I'd also suggest moving around the text boxes so they don't sandwich text between them, I personally see no reason they all have to be in the content section, I'd move one up a bit for a better layout.
 * also the hook itself would benefit from a minor copyedit, personally, I'd phrase it "states that the Hindu god Rama..." JMO.
 * Just smooth it out a bit and I'll have no problems passing this. Montanabw (talk) 22:05, 15 February 2016 (UTC)
 * ALT1: ... that the Rama tapaniya Upanishad states that the Hindu god Rama (pictured) is same as the Atman (soul) and Brahman (ultimate reality)?
 * @Nvvchar: I have copyedited the article. Please review and address anything I missed. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 01:48, 16 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. Text box has been moved. coauthor has edited and suggested  ALT1 hook. Please see.  Nvvchar . 02:19, 16 February 2016 (UTC)

Much better! Good to go with ALT1. Sorry for the delay getting back to you! Montanabw (talk) 06:15, 18 February 2016 (UTC)