Template:Did you know nominations/Ramize Erer


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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 11:03, 10 January 2018 (UTC)

Ramize Erer

 * ... that the hell was going on when Ramize Erer published her cartoon of a masturbating girl?

Source: "Als sie ein junges Mädchen beim Masturbieren zeichnete, war die Empörung groß." , "Ich zeichnete als erste ein masturbierendes Mädchen. Da war die Hölle los." 
 * Reviewed: Armanda Degli Abbati

Created by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 11:18, 12 December 2017 (UTC).


 * Symbol possible vote.svgle is new enough, long enough, and within policy, although it needs copyediting. QPQ met. Hook is the right length, cited, and isn't negative. My only problem is that the hook isn't not quite idiomatic English, or an idiomatic translation of the German. "Da war die Hölle los" seems to mean more like "All hell broke loose". Maybe something like "when Ramize Erer published a cartoon of a masturbating girl, "all hell broke loose"?" would be better? (And edit the article accordingly). 04:09, December 20, 2017‎ Apocheir
 * ✅ CeeGee 02:37, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
 * ALT1 ... that when Ramize Erer published a cartoon of a masturbating girl, "all hell broke loose"?
 * Symbol possible vote.svg I took the liberty of adding some quotation marks to ALT1 where it quotes her, but otherwise I'm OK with that hook. I've looked closer at the article, and I think it really needs to be copyedited before going on DYK. -Apocheir (talk) 03:35, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
 * &, I've given the article a copyedit and added two clarification needed tags where I'm not sure what's being said. I also wonder a bit about the quotations—CeeGee, did you generally translate Turkish quotations into English? I didn't want to touch them, but a number of them have grammatical errors. Other than that, while the article could use more work (e.g., lots of sentences beginning with "She"), I think it's close to a DYK-appropriate level. --Usernameunique (talk) 12:47, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for your copy-editing. I tried to clarify the two issues. Please recheck. I kindly ask you to modify the text for the many "she"s and the grammatical errors since I don't know at which extent it is fine and my English grammer knowledge aeems to be limited. CeeGee 13:36, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
 * , one question. When you say "The background of her sharp-edged cartoons", do you mean the physical background (i.e., it looks as if her cartoons are set in a beauty parlor), or, instead, that the gossip in the beauty parlor inspires many of the topics of Erer's cartoons (or it could be both, I suppose)? --Usernameunique (talk) 14:27, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
 * I mean the gossip, however the physical background is not excluded. CeeGee 14:54, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Got it, I've adjusted it accordingly. Clarification issues are now dealt with. --Usernameunique (talk) 15:02, 27 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Symbol confirmed.svg Made a couple minor copyedits myself, but we're good now. -Apocheir (talk) 16:28, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot for the approval. However, someone has to remove the warn tag about "copyedit needed". CeeGee 22:27, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
 * I added it, so I'll take it off. -Apocheir (talk) 23:30, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Symbol question.svg Hi, I came by to promote ALT1, but there is a "citation needed" tag and a paragraph that lacks any citations under "Criticism". Yoninah (talk) 21:05, 9 January 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ CeeGee 06:40, 10 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Symbol voting keep.svg Thank you, restoring tick. Yoninah (talk) 10:39, 10 January 2018 (UTC)