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Ravinder Singh (author)

 * ... that Ravinder Singh became a writer after he lost his love in an accident?
 * ALT ... that Ravinder Singh became a writer after he lost his love in an accident five days before they were to be engaged?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Why This Kolaveri Di

Created by Ansumang (talk). Self nom at 13:17, 18 December 2011 (UTC)


 * Symbol possible vote.svg Only 1213 characters of "readable prose". Needs at least 1500.  Other checks not performed. --Allen3 talk 20:44, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Now 1796 characters. Thanks for reviewing. -- ɑηsuмaη  ʈ ᶏ ɭ Ϟ 08:11, 24 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Passing comment. I think linking "writer" and "girlfriend" is overlinking. Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:16, 26 December 2011 (UTC)
 * They should preferably be delinked, yes. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:32, 27 December 2011 (UTC)

Done, now please do a final review. -- ɑηsuмaη  ʈ ᶏ ɭ Ϟ 08:58, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Hook: This would probably draw more hits: ALT ... that Ravinder Singh became a writer after he lost his love in an accident five days before they were to be engaged?
 * Article: Long enough, new enough. Needs a copyedit; lots of missing articles and particles. Referencing is poor (quotes need references, all of them... and even then they are probably better at Wikiquote; also, two sentences need references).
 * Summary:Symbol question.svg Needs more work. Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:32, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
 * You should also work a bit on paraphrasing. For example, this and this have a bit too close paraphrasing. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:32, 29 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot for the ALT and correcting the grammar. Few matched phrases are reference title and few I don't know how to alter. I think now it is good to go. -- ɑηsuмaη  ʈ ᶏ ɭ Ϟ 06:14, 29 December 2011 (UTC)


 * Symbol confirmed.svg ALT1 good to go. Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:22, 31 December 2011 (UTC)