Template:Did you know nominations/Rawalpindi Institute of Cardiology

Rawalpindi Institute of Cardiology

 * ... that renowned Cardiac surgeon, Dr. Hasnat Khan will head the Cardiac surgery department of the Rawalpindi Institute of Cardiology?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Miguel El Gringo Villarreal

Created/expanded by Sahara4u (talk). Self nominated at 15:14, 10 April 2013 (UTC).


 * Symbol possible vote.svg Hook is not supported by its sources. It states that Khan will take over the surgery department, and doesn't mention cardiac surgery. Furthermore, the DYK is written in future tense, while April 10 has already gone by. —♦♦ AMBER  (ЯʘCK)  15:21, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
 * ALT1: ... that Rawalpindi Institute of Cardiology is a 272-beds hospital which consists of 48-beds emergency department, 24-beds Intensive Care Unit, 14-beds Coronary care unit and four Operation theaters?
 * I don't think hooks that describe how many beds are in any hospital could be interesting. As far as I know, none of those numbers are spectacular, and I would therefore decide against ALT1. The original hook is fine, provided that the "cardiac" part goes out of both the hook and the article. Like this:
 * ALT2: ... that cardiac surgeon, Dr. Hasnat Khan will head the surgery department of the Rawalpindi Institute of Cardiology?
 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Now I need someone to reassess this. —♦♦  AMBER  (ЯʘCK)  16:01, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg
 * Article
 * PASSED New - Most major creation of content occurred from 9-11 April 2013, with it being submitted on 10 April for its initial review
 * PASSED Long enough - Article on the 11 Apirl had 455 words, making up 2858 characters of prose
 * PASSED Within policy - Appears to be neutral, cited to reliable sources using inline citations, with no apparent issues of copyright concerns
 * N/A BLP- Article is about an organization, therefore a BLP tag is not necessary.
 * Hook - ALT2
 * PASSED Format - Hooks is 18 words long, made up of 122 characters
 * HOLD Content - Although the hook is interesting, and cited in the article, it is not neutral. The word "renowned" is listed in WP:PEA and is a word to watch, and should be removed in order for the DYK to pass assessment. Hook is interesting, cited in the article, and worded neutrally.
 * Other
 * PASSED QPQ - Nominator assessed another DYKN
 * N/A Images - No images used in the article
 * --RightCowLeftCoast (talk) 07:13, 8 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Removed "renowned". Zia Khan 11:34, 8 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg With renowned removed, ALT2 appears to pass requirements.--RightCowLeftCoast (talk) 13:23, 8 May 2013 (UTC)