Template:Did you know nominations/Rebellion Beer Company

Rebellion Beer Company
Created/expanded by Remdabest (talk). Nominated by Northamerica1000 (talk) at 05:11, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
 * ... that the Rebellion Beer Company, a microbrewery in Marlow Bottom, South East England, uses the chalky water of the local Chiltern Hills, which has high levels of minerals and salts?


 * Symbol question.svg Article is new enough and just over the limit of 1500 characters. I think even some beer lovers will not understand the phrase that the IPA was not a true IPA; this should be explained. Three of the references are just bare urls and should be improved. I will join a few of the one-paraqraph sections in a moment. --Pgallert (talk) 20:40, 25 December 2012 (UTC)
 * I've clarified that the information about the IPA was from a book, by rewriting the sentence to: "In the book World's Best Beers: One Thousand Craft Brews from Cask to Glass, Ben McFarland commented that the IPA was not a true IPA, and described it as "sweet" and "plummish". Northamerica1000(talk) 06:35, 26 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Hi Northamerica, what I mean is that a sentence like X is not a true X is meaningless if no explanation or reason is given. I could not find that reason in the sources, but as you write about beer topics, maybe you can add an explanation? --- This is a DYK issue insofar as removing the sentence as it stands would bring the article below 1500 characters. Cheers, Pgallert (talk) 10:04, 27 December 2012 (UTC)


 * I've removed the sentence, per the contention, and have expanded the article with new information. Northamerica1000(talk) 20:07, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg The sentence I complained about has been removed, and the article is still well above 1500 characters. Good to go. --Pgallert (talk) 20:20, 1 January 2013 (UTC)