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Richard Nunns

 * ... that although being a Pākehā, Richard Nunns (pictured) is regarded as the foremost authority on Māori musical instruments?
 * ALT1 ... that although being a Pākehā (a white New Zealander), Richard Nunns (pictured) is regarded as the foremost authority on Māori musical instruments?
 * ALT2 ... that Richard Nunns (pictured) is regarded as the foremost authority on Māori musical instruments, despite being a Pākehā?


 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Zsolt Gárdonyi
 * Comment: Newly expanded article.

Created/expanded by Schwede66 (talk). Self nom at 18:08, 25 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Symbol confirmed.svg Images are fine too. Good to go, though I prefer the grammar in my ALT3, as it seems clearer. Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:59, 3 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review (you do a heck of a lot of work for this project). I take it you mean ALT2, and it needs some more attention, as there's a bit of a double up. I struck out some superfluous words, but your preference might be to choose the other option of using the words that are in the hook.  Schwede 66  18:38, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Darn, you're right. I've cut the extraneous text. Regarding possible alts, I am a little iffy with the tense agreement (maybe because I'm not from NZ); I'd expect to see "despite being" and not "although being". Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:07, 3 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Re tense agreement, you also need to keep in mind that English isn't my first language. If it doesn't sound quite right, chances are it's because of that.  Schwede 66  00:35, 4 October 2011 (UTC)