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Rock Lawn and Carriage House

 * ... that Rock Lawn (pictured), the Garrison, New York, home of Hamilton Fish II and Patty Hearst, is Richard Upjohn's only Italian villa-style house in the Hudson Highlands?
 * Reviewed: Privacy and Civil Liberties Oversight Board report on mass surveillance
 * Comment: Hook fact for second part on p. 5 of cited document. Article in process of being expanded.

5x expanded by Daniel Case (talk). Self nominated at 07:24, 19 February 2014 (UTC).


 * Symbol confirmed.svg This impressive article is a fivefold expansion and is new enough and long enough. The hook is well sourced, the image is appropriately licensed and I saw no evidence of close paraphrasing. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)


 * What do you think of reducing blue and commas a bit? I gave up understanding after half of the hook ;)
 * ALT1: ... that Rock Lawn (pictured), home of Hamilton Fish II and Patty Hearst, is Richard Upjohn's only Italian villa-style house in the Hudson Highlands? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:06, 25 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Symbol question.svg I removed this from Prep 4, because Gerda's ALT1 hook was never approved. If she wrote the hook, someone else has to sign off on it.  Right? — Maile  (talk) 22:01, 25 February 2014 (UTC)


 * I don't think so. It was approved, and I only shortened it. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:03, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
 * I goofed. Sorry.  Back to Prep 4 with this. — Maile  (talk) 22:09, 25 February 2014 (UTC)