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Salmson S4

 * ... that at the 30th Paris Motor show in 1936, the Salmson S4-DA was exhibited without any body?
 * Reviewed: Cross of Mathilde

Created by Charles01 (talk). Nominated by Rcsprinter123 (talk) at 17:30, 9 February 2014 (UTC).


 * The article is new enough and long enough. In fact, it's a very nice article indeed. However, I think the hook needs some clarification. Since not too many people know what the Salmson S4-DA is, why not make a clarification by saying its a German car? I think that'll grab more attention. Here's the ALT:


 * ALT1: ... that at the 30th Paris Motor show in 1936, the French automobile Salmson S4-DA was exhibited without any body?

Let me know what you think. Please ping me on my talk page once you've read my review. Étienne Dolet (talk) 07:06, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
 * That's a good idea, however the car is French.  Rcsprinter    (chatter)  @ 12:53, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Woops! Should've known that. Anyways, were good to go. New enough. Long enough. Hook is cited. AGF on the offline source. Étienne Dolet (talk) 18:31, 10 February 2014 (UTC)