Template:Did you know nominations/Sarah Pucill


 * The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as |this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by Ritchie333 (talk) (cont)  12:19, 25 September 2014 (UTC)

I just checked the latest version of the article, which hasn't seen any substantial editing since 13 September, and Earwig's tool still reports a 61.5% possible copyvio, principally from the subject's own site as mentioned in the main discussion.

Sarah Pucill

 * ... that Sarah Pucill part essay, part film poem, Magic Mirror restages the surrealist Claude Cahun's photographs as a series of tableaus vivants?
 * Reviewed: Susan Leeman
 * Comment: A new article started at the Wikipedia:SHE MUST BE WIKI: Feminist Film Wiki-a-thon

Created by Ieditfilm (talk), Alphabettylondon (talk), Shiningroad (talk), and Edwardx (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 23:57, 1 August 2014 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg Right, age and size check out. Hook checks out. Someone cut-and-pasted the sentence "The film examines the appearance and disappearance of the phantom as it relates to the present/absent dynamic of visible lesbian sexuality in the canons of both cinema and art history." from this ref. Also that ref is used to cite that she's been a reader at Westminster since 2000...but I couldn't find that date in the source. Otherwise article appears faithful to source material without paraphrasing too closely. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:20, 13 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I've rephrased most of the copy and paste sentence and left a small part as a quote, with a cite added. I've also found a cite for the "since 2000" bit. Changed "tableaus vivants" to "tableaux vivants" - my poor French. Edwardx (talk) 10:51, 22 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg good to go. Sorry, missed this. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 02:12, 29 August 2014 (UTC)


 * Symbol question.svg Pulled from queue for copyright concerns. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:22, 30 August 2014 (UTC)
 * To expand, there is some material taken verbatim and some more closely paraphrased from this site, which is copyrighted. Noting the concerns raised by Casliber above, it is possible that there is additional problematic copying involving other sites. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:55, 30 August 2014 (UTC)


 * Symbol possible vote.svg Article has had a "close paraphrasing" template on it since August 30; nominator Edwardx was pinged on September 3 and has not yet replied here or edited the article to take care of the problematic paraphrasing. If there is no response very soon, this nomination will be marked for closure. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:52, 8 September 2014 (UTC)


 * I have extensively copyedited and reorganised the article, either rewording or using quotes around phrases that could not easily be reworked. I hope it will now past muster. My apologies for not tackling this sooner. Edwardx (talk) 23:23, 8 September 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your work so far. I have removed the tag, but I think a bit more editing is needed before DYK. For example, "Many of her films take place within the confines of domestic space" remains quite close to "The majority of her films take place within the confinements of domestic space". Nikkimaria (talk) 04:02, 9 September 2014 (UTC)
 * And thank you for your diligence. I've done some more copyediting. I did try to teach our new editors at the editathon about not copying and pasting, but it looks like this is a message we'll have to keep repeating. Edwardx (talk) 22:42, 13 September 2014 (UTC)
 * Agreed, as it is a pervasive problem: "The film examines the phantom's appearance and disappearance in relation to" and "The film examines the appearance and disappearance of the phantom as it relates to". Often problems like this require extensive checking and restructuring. Nikkimaria (talk) 18:41, 18 September 2014 (UTC)