Template:Did you know nominations/Second Banda Oriental campaign

Second Banda Oriental campaign

 * ... that Buenos Aires besieged and captured Montevideo during the Second Banda Oriental campaign?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Duncan Barrett

Created/expanded by Cambalachero (talk). Self nom at 13:47, 23 April 2012 (UTC)


 * Date, length good. Needs a bit of a copyedit.  I would like to see more than a single source in this article.  The Interior  (Talk) 01:30, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
 * This sentence is unclear - "The navy set a naval blockade to Montevideo, and the battle of Buceo defined it." Defined the blockade, the war, or ? (nice map BTW) The Interior  (Talk) 01:38, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. I added references from a second book, and clarified the sentence. Cambalachero (talk) 23:22, 4 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Agf for offline sources. The Interior  (Talk) 00:31, 6 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Change "sieged" to "besieged" in the hook; it's a better word, and it's the one used in the article. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:12, 6 May 2012 (UTC)
 * thx, changed it in the article but missed it in the hook. The Interior  (Talk) 04:14, 6 May 2012 (UTC)