Template:Did you know nominations/Self-Defense Training Camp

Self Defense Training Camp
Created/expanded by ZappaOMati (talk). Self nom at 22:40, 7 September 2012 (UTC)
 * ... that Self-Defense Training Camp was criticized for its emphasis on crotch kicking?


 * The hook reads as if it refers to a real-life training camp. It would be better to clarify that this is about a video game, so I propose alt2. -- Brown HairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 08:21, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
 * The hook reads as if it refers to a real-life training camp. It would be better to clarify that this is about a video game, so I propose alt2. -- Brown HairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 08:21, 12 September 2012 (UTC)


 * ALT2 ... that the video game Self-Defense Training Camp was criticized for its emphasis on crotch kicking?


 * Pictogram voting keep.svg for ALT1; I agree with BrownHairedGirl's concern, and I've also added italics (which are there in the article title). New enough, long enough (even when direct quotations are removed), well footnoted, the hook fact is referenced, and I checked about 2/3 of the refs and found no overly close paraphrasing. AGF checkmark rather than the other because I am not familiar enough with the field to know whether any of the sites quoted are not reliable sources. My one quibble would be that the GameZone review (ref 9) is overall quite positive, for instance saying the game "does a pretty remarkable job at [teaching you valuable self-defense lessons]", and that's not reflected in the article. Yngvadottir (talk) 21:19, 19 September 2012 (UTC)