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Seth Lochhead

 * ... that screenwriter Seth Lochhead shared the writing credit for the 2011 film Hanna with David Farr although they never met in person?
 * Reviewed: Barbara Sturgeon

Created/expanded by 97198 (talk). Self nom at 03:38, 6 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Symbol question.svg The source does not back up that they "never met in person"... It states: "Seth answered a number of questions from the audience, from "Who is David Farr, the other writer credited on Hanna?" (Answer: Seth doesn’t personally know him; Farr is one of the writers who wrote a draft during the development stage)". I've met and shook the hand of the Queen of England - I don't know her personally, however.  Nik  the  stoned  17:11, 6 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Okay, I guess I interpreted that wrong. How about:
 * ALT1... that screenwriter Seth Lochhead shared the writing credit for the 2011 film Hanna with David Farr although they do not personally know each other?
 * 97198 (talk) 05:59, 7 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Symbol confirmed.svg New enough; just long enough (I counted 1,547 chars. of prose); I checked about half the sources and found neither misrepresentation nor overly close paraphrasing. Clearly and neutrally written. Sufficient number of references, though not to stellar publications. I labeled the proposed new hook as ALT1, it has a ref on it that supports it, good to go for that hook, striking out the original hook for clarity. Yngvadottir (talk) 18:37, 24 January 2012 (UTC)