Template:Did you know nominations/Sketches from an Island 2


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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:00, 29 August 2016 (UTC)

Sketches from an Island 2

 * ... that producer Mark Barrott's Sketches from an Island 2 represents a "more relaxed" part of Ibiza than the aspect of the island its predecessor is based on?


 * ALT1 ... that producer Mark Barrott's Sketches from an Island 2 represents a "more relaxed" part of Ibiza than its predecessor?


 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Qabatiya

Created by EditorE (talk). Self-nominated at 17:14, 22 July 2016 (UTC).

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 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg No issues found with article, ready for human review.
 * &#x2713; This article is new and was created on 23:18, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
 * &#x2713; This article meets the DYK criteria at 5239 characters
 * &#x2713; All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
 * &#x2713; This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
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 * No overall issues detected
 * &#x2713; The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 151 characters
 * &#x2713; The hook ALT1 is an appropriate length at 114 characters
 * &#x2713; EditorE has more than 5 DYK credits. A QPQ review of Template:Did you know nominations/Qabatiya was performed for this nomination.
 * Comment Shorter ALT1 added. Edwardx (talk) 13:10, 23 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg This article is new enough and long enough. Going with ALT1 as being snappier. The hook facts are sourced inline, the article is neutral and I detected no policy issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:17, 7 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Symbol question.svg Hi, I came by to promote this, but cannot find the ALT1 hook facts in the 2 online sources. The Resident Advisor reference uses the word "relaxed" in terms of the mood, not in terms of Ibiza. could you confirm that the hook fact is in the paywalled Financial Times source? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 13:43, 9 August 2016 (UTC)
 * ALT2: that Mark Barrott's Sketches from an Island 2 represents a more "exclusive" aspect of the Ibiza island than its predecessor?
 * And yes, this info was in the Financial Times source. editorEهեইдအ😎 15:48, 9 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Symbol voting keep.svg Thank you. I'm assuming the source used the word "exclusive", so I put it in quotes here and in the article (please correct me if I'm wrong). ALT2 offline hook ref AGF and cited inline. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 21:10, 9 August 2016 (UTC)

Reopened, source doesn't use the word "exclusive", see WT:DYK and and. Fram (talk) 07:54, 10 August 2016 (UTC)
 * The FT source is behind a paywall. Why do you think that the word "exclusive" does not occur there? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:19, 10 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Because I could access the same review from those other two links I kindly provided? Same author, date, title and newspaper... Fram (talk) 08:22, 10 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Actually, I was thinking of the wrong source. None of the reviews use the word "exclusive", but the Pitchfork review saids "While affiliating himself with Ibiza and naming his second full-length for it once more, Barrott moves into a more rarefied space on Sketches From An Island 2, an example of a sequel surpassing the original." Rarefied is a synonym for exclusive, and the quotes of the word exclusive in the article should be removed. My bad editorEهեইдအ😎 09:22, 10 August 2016 (UTC)
 * But in that case, you have completely misunderstood the source. It doesn't represent a more rarefied or "exclusive aspect of the Ibiza island than its predecessor?", it is rarefied because it is a sequel which is better than the original. Fram (talk) 09:37, 10 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Curse my crapping reading compression skills! Alright, criticism taken. Here's a new hook:
 * ALT3: ... that Mark Barrott originally planned his second studio album Sketches from an Island 2 to be an extended play? editorEهեইдအ😎 11:54, 10 August 2016 (UTC)


 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Reviewer needed to check ALT3 hook. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:05, 28 August 2016 (UTC)

ALT 3 is stated in the article and sourced online. There do not seem to be any other issues outstanding on this review, so this one passes. — Maile (talk) 19:25, 28 August 2016 (UTC)