Template:Did you know nominations/Sophie, Princess of Prussia

Sophie, Princess of Prussia
Created/expanded by Ruby2010 (talk), Ejgreen77 (talk). Nominated by Ruby2010 (talk) at 03:04, 8 September 2011 (UTC)
 * ... that on 25 August 2011, Sophie of Isenburg married Georg Friedrich, the head of the House of Hohenzollern in a civil ceremony?



Reviewed Comfort Momoh  R uby   comment!  03:20, 8 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Sources are fine; spotchecked and looks okay. Creation date is good. I think the hook is slightly weak and could be expanded to include something to the effect that they had two ceremonies and that the second ceremony was during a 950 year commemoration, or something like that. I'm bad at writing hooks though, so no help to you, I"m afraid. Otherwise fine and ready to go. Truthkeeper (talk) 23:39, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

ALT1 ...that Sophie of Isenburg married Prince Georg Friedrich in commemoration of the 950th anniversary of the founding of the House of Hohenzollern?

ALT2: ...that in commemoration of the 950th anniversary of the founding of the House of Hohenzollern, Sophie of Isenburg married its head, Prince Georg Friedrich?

How do these look?  R uby  comment!  01:51, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg I like ALT 1 - "its head" in ALT 2 is a bit awkward. Truthkeeper (talk) 01:57, 10 September 2011 (UTC)