Template:Did you know nominations/Sue Bailey Thurman


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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 23:28, 11 September 2015 (UTC)

Sue Bailey Thurman

 * ... that Sue Bailey Thurman used a food as a marketing tool to write a history of professional black women which was published by the National Council of Negro Women in 1958?


 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Lucille Farrier Stickel
 * Comment: WikiProject Women GA expansion

Improved to Good Article status by SusunW (talk), Penny Richards (talk), Rosiestep (talk), Ipigott (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk), and We hope (talk). Nominated by SusunW (talk) at 16:32, 30 August 2015 (UTC).


 * Symbol confirmed.svg Long enough; GA enough; GA'ed recently enough; QPQ QPQed; no bad stuff done with other people's text; pic is ok to use, but a bit meaningless at DYK size; hook is OK but doesn't flow very well as it has her using food to write which is going to be messy (I suppose she could get away with a squeezy sauce bottle); how about:
 * ALT ... that Sue Bailey Thurman wrote a "palatable history" of professional black women in a cookbook which was published by the National Council of Negro Women in 1958?
 * Somebody else will need to give it the final tick if you use that (quick QPQers, save yourself the trouble of doing a review by approving my ALT; limited time offer; must end soon!) Belle (talk) 22:40, 30 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks . I'm fine with the change in the hook. Sorry the photo is so small, but I had to add the fly page when I realized the cover did not have her name on it. I just was glad to find a picture at all. Most are owned by those Universities they deposited their archives with. SusunW (talk) 22:58, 30 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Calling for a reviewer for the ALT hook. CoooOOOOOooooOOOOoooeeeeee! Belle (talk) 10:29, 3 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Oh Hi ... the Alt is fine its OK for length and its sourced on-line to a secondary source. I suspect the image of her though stands more chance of making the front page.... or cut down the book image to create a crop just for the DYK. Thanks Victuallers (talk) 13:26, 3 September 2015 (UTC) Would ... that Sue Bailey Thurman wrote a cookbook which was a "palatable history" of professional black women? be hookier? Victuallers (talk) 13:29, 3 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Can't use the image of her. It is fair use. Have found no images of her that are not copyrighted. What if we just use:
 * ALT2 ... that in 1958 Sue Bailey Thurman used a cookbook to publish a "palatable history" of professional black women? SusunW (talk) 16:29, 3 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg That's fine with ALT2 and everything else per my earlier review. Ready to go. Belle (talk) 16:37, 3 September 2015 (UTC)
 * I moved "in 1958". Where it was at the end, it could be interpreted as saying that it merely covered the events of 1958, rather than being published in 1958 and spanning the whole history. M AN d ARAX  •  XAЯA b ИA M  22:14, 3 September 2015 (UTC)