Template:Did you know nominations/Take a Knee, My Ass (I Won't Take a Knee)


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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:03, 16 August 2018 (UTC)

Take a Knee, My Ass (I Won't Take a Knee)

 * ... that Neal McCoy wanted his song "Take a Knee, My Ass (I Won't Take a Knee)" to "bring people together"?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Adel Mahmoud

Created by Kingoflettuce (talk). Self-nominated at 14:48, 22 June 2018 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg Full review to follow, but I don't think ALT0 is interesting to a broad audience. Perhaps more hooks could be suggested here? One suggestion could be one that plays on the song's title, another suggestion would tie it to it being written as a response to the anthem kneelings. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 04:41, 27 June 2018 (UTC)
 * On the contrary, the hook is humorous and interesting if you understand the context (NFL players protesting the American national anthem), which has received worldwide coverage.  Sounder Bruce  07:05, 1 July 2018 (UTC)
 * I know, but while the NFL anthem protests are big news over in the United States, I'm not sure if it's the case elsewhere. Most people are vaguely aware of it I suppose, but I suppose that even as someone who follows the NFL, I don't really see how the "bringing people together" part is interesting, since I don't know if people can get the connection immediately. Like I said, I think one possible suggestion here is an alternate hook that makes the connection to the anthem protests explicit. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:07, 1 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Would respectfully request that you review the article instead. As Bruce notes, the humour and 'hookiness' is obvious. I would like to see this being run. Kingoflettuce (talk) 15:57, 1 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Directly calling out its connection to the protests makes the hook lose its luster. Concealing it within the link could work:
 * ALT1: ... that Neal McCoy wanted his anti-protest song "Take a Knee, My Ass (I Won't Take a Knee)" to "bring people together"?
 * As for the second bit, there is coverage of the grammatical failings of the title and it could be made into a hook like so:
 * ALT2: ... that Neal McCoy's song "Take a Knee, My Ass (I Won't Take a Knee)" was interpreted in an unforeseen manner? (or insert your favorite knee-in-ass link).
 *  Sounder Bruce  00:41, 2 July 2018 (UTC)
 * The top option is somewhat better, but again I'm not really sure on it. Anti-protest songs do generally attempt to "bring people together" so it's not unusual. The second one is somewhat interesting, but the hook fact is not mentioned in the article.
 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg We'll need to have a second review here on the appropriateness of the two new ALTs. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:25, 2 July 2018 (UTC)
 * The link to "unforeseen manner" is totally irrelevant IMO, and I don't find the hook very compelling even without it. The other hook looks okay to me., do you see any possibilities with this one? Gatoclass (talk) 08:08, 11 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Reviewer needed for ALT1; I have struck ALT2 per Gatoclass, and as EEng hasn't replied in the past month, it's time to move on without them. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:02, 14 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg ALT1 is fine. While the motivation may not be unusual for an anti-protest song, anti-protest songs are themselves unusual, at least at DYK, so I think this will pique readers' interest. (ALT2 is how I read the song title myself, but would require some expansion of the article (pun fully intended), since the only misreading discussed there to date is as an instruction to McCoy's own behind to genuflect) &rsaquo; Mortee  talk 15:56, 15 August 2018 (UTC)