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The FP

 * ... that The FP is a film based around a Dance Dance Revolution style video game in which people kill each other by winning dance-offs?
 * Reviewed: Kewsi Nyantakyi

Created by Corvoe (talk). Self nominated at 16:47, 5 February 2014 (UTC).


 * Well referenced, AGFing there are no copyright concerns, long enough and new enough. Only issue I see is that the hook "people kill each other" is not in the article.  I've read it, and searched on several close phrasing alternatives.  Can you check on that?--v/r - TP 03:52, 14 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Added a blip in "Production" where the Trost brothers are asked how they die playing the game, and that they left it unexplained because they found it funnier. Should I reword it to "in which people die after losing a dance-off?"  Corvoe  (speak to me)  02:27, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Kill and death and really separate things. I read an article about a man who died after winning a cockroach eating competition .  I wouldn't say the other competitors killed him by losing.  Can you rephrase either the article or the hook to make them match a little better?--v/r - TP 02:32, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure what you're looking for now. I explicitly stated that they die of something called a "187" when they are defeated. I'm not sure what I'm wording wrong.  Corvoe  (speak to me)  03:42, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
 * To clarify, I'm suggesting changing the hook to' ALT1: ... that The FP is a film based around a Dance Dance Revolution style video game in which people die after losing a dance-off?  Corvoe  (speak to me)  03:45, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Looks better. Did you want to include "187" in the hook as well for the "what the crap?" factor?--v/r - TP 18:42, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
 * ALT1: ... that The FP is a film based around a Dance Dance Revolution style video game in which people die of a "187" after losing a dance-off? Like that?  Corvoe  (speak to me)  04:52, 16 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Perfect, good to go.--v/r - TP 20:25, 16 February 2014 (UTC)