Template:Did you know nominations/The Naked Monster

The Naked Monster
Archived nomination *Promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk): Template talk:Did you know daily log/2011 August 6 
 * The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page.  No further edits should be made to this page.


 * ... that the 2005 science fiction and horror film spoof The Naked Monster took 21 years to make and was Kenneth Tobey's final film?


 * Comment: :*Reviewed: Magistrates of England and Wales

5x expanded by MichaelQSchmidt (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk). Self nom at 05:29, 7 August 2011 (UTC)

Mostly looks good, but article needs some copyediting before it can be used. Anaxial (talk) 16:42, 7 August 2011 (UTC) Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

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 * Length, format, content rules – Anaxial (talk) 16:31, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Source – Anaxial (talk) 16:31, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Interest – Anaxial (talk) 16:31, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
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 * ALT hooks, if proposed –

Article Comments/discussion:
 * Length – Anaxial (talk) 16:31, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Vintage – Anaxial (talk) 16:31, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Sourcing (V, RS, BLP) – Anaxial (talk) 16:31, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Neutrality – Anaxial (talk) 16:31, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Plagiarism/close paraphrasing – Anaxial (talk) 16:31, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * copyvio (files) –
 * Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting – Symbol question.svg Needs some copyediting for spelling and mangled sentences Anaxial (talk) 16:31, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Have revisted the article and addressed spelling and mangled sentences.  Schmidt,  MICHAEL Q. 21:27, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Looks like all my concerns about the prose have been fixed. In the meantime, somebody had nominated the article for deletion, though, and that process will have to be resolved. No issues from me, though. Anaxial (talk) 18:50, 12 August 2011 (UTC)