Template:Did you know nominations/The Vietnamization of New Jersey

The Vietnamization of New Jersey
Created/expanded by 28bytes (talk). Self nom at 23:15, 8 November 2011 (UTC)
 * ... that the 1976 play The Vietnamization of New Jersey has been noted for its parallels to the United States' involvement in Iraq?


 * I reviewed Pied Monarch. 28bytes (talk) 23:25, 8 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg. But two comments.  First -- the hook has to be fixed; either "was noted" or "has been noted", but not "was been noted".  Second, I think the parallel is not to the Iraq War, but to the post-war involvement -- if you agree, you might wish to consider a revision to that in the hook.  Best.--Epeefleche (talk) 01:37, 9 November 2011 (UTC)
 * D'oh! Thanks for catching that typo (and for the speedy review.) I've updated the hook with a (hopefully) more appropriate target. 28bytes (talk) 02:10, 9 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me. Best.--Epeefleche (talk) 02:11, 9 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me. Best.--Epeefleche (talk) 02:11, 9 November 2011 (UTC)