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Toni Leviste

 * ... that equestrian Toni Leviste was the first Southeast Asian to compete in the Show Jumping World Cup?
 * expanded 5x from 332 to 2679 Characters of prose by TitanOne (talk). Self nom at 18:38, 4 October 2011 (UTC)


 * There are primary sources used, though they appear to meet the guidelines at WP:PRIMARY. Can someone verify this? Also, as per REFPUNC, citations should be placed after punctuations.--Lionratz (talk) 04:18, 8 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Symbol question.svg In checking the primary sources mentioned by Lionratz, I found that the "Equestrian Park" section of the article contains some statements that aren't supported by the cited sources. DYK does not generally require that every statement in the article be attributed to a source, but I think that statements like "Most of the country’s competitive equestrian training takes place in this facility" need support. --Orlady (talk) 15:04, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Please check, reword and added cite.--TitanOne (talk) 11:35, 20 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry, but the new source still doesn't support the statement that "Most of the Philippines' up and coming competitive equestrians train in this facility." It says that an equestrienne from Canada "recently concluded a two-day intensive show jumping clinic at the Leviste Equestrian Park in Lipa City with some of the Philippines up and coming show jumping stars." One clinic does not convert to a broad statement about "most". --Orlady (talk) 18:07, 20 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Well having that statement within the prose doesn't really affect the hook, neither would the article nor the expansion size. Took it out as not to create complications. Please let me know if you have other concerns within the day. I will be taking a wikibreak, in-lieu of a family member passing over the last few days. --TitanOne (talk) 14:29, 24 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Symbol confirmed.svg This is OK to go. --Orlady (talk) 15:27, 1 November 2011 (UTC)