Template:Did you know nominations/Torture during the 2011–2012 Bahraini uprising 2

Torture during the 2011–2012 Bahraini uprising

 * ... that at least five people died due to torture during the 2011–2012 Bahraini uprising?
 * Comment: This article had CV problem before, now resolved. I have less than 5 DYK credits

Created/expanded by Bahraini Activist (talk). Self nom at 17:15, 5 March 2012 (UTC)




 * Symbol confirmed.svg Article no longer has problematic picture in it.  Hook is properly formatted.
 * Symbol question.svg Article was nominated on March 5. Symbol question.svg  If we are giving writing credit, it really, really should include User:Moonriddengirl because Template:Did you know nominations/Torture during the 2011–2012 Bahraini uprising shows a fail for the article based on copyright violations.  User:Moonriddengirl  came in and did a fantastic job fixing those problems on 5 March 2012, when the article was renominated (but NOT re-expanded).  I'm rather confident she fixed all the plagiarism problems and that the sources support the text because copyright is her speciality.
 * Symbol question.svg Hook text says "that at least five people died ". The source text says "The Commission finds that five persons died as a result of torture.502".  I would remove "at least".
 * * ALT1... that five people died due to torture during the 2011–2012 Bahraini uprising?
 * Because this is supported by the source and by the count of people. At least is a weasel word implying more when the source does not say that.


 * Pictogram voting keep.svg The article looks like it has a fair number of sources that could help with the neutrality issues cited in Template:Did you know nominations/Torture during the 2011–2012 Bahraini uprising. --LauraHale (talk) 06:32, 17 March 2012 (UTC)

If User:Moonriddengirl is given credit for DYK making here for her heroic efforts in fixing this, ALT1 is used to align with the source and another person believes previous issues have been adequately addressed, I'm willing to give it a tick. --LauraHale (talk) 06:32, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Keep "at least", other source say more were killed by torture. User:Moonriddengirl did a great job by closing the CV problem.  Mohamed CJ  (talk) 09:00, 17 March 2012 (UTC)