Template:Did you know nominations/Travis Head

Travis Head
Created/expanded by IgnorantArmies (talk). Nominated by LlamaAl (talk) at 16:14, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
 * ... that Australian cricketer Travis Head represented South Australia at both under-17 and under-19?

--LlamaAl (talk) 15:03, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
 * (Article's creator) thanks for the nomination, but your blurb is pretty boring, to be honest. I'd suggest something along the lines of "... that cricketer Travis Head was hit by a car shortly after completing a four-day match for South Australia?  IgnorantArmies  14:58, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
 * ALT 1: ... that cricketer Travis Head was hit by a car shortly after completing a four-day match for South Australia?


 * Symbol confirmed.svg Just barely squeaks by the 1500 character mark. I mean, with 1518 characters of prose, I gave thought to failing it as too short despite its technically surpassing 1500. I do suggest breaking it up into more than one paragraph for readibility. Anywho, I prefer the ALT1 hook, which is reliably sourced. The article as a whole is well sourced. This wasn't a self-nom, so QPQ is not required. – Muboshgu (talk) 23:42, 8 February 2013 (UTC)