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Vaillancourt Fountain

 * ... that slogans which had to be removed were painted on San Francisco's Vaillancourt Fountain by both its sculptor and, years later, by a famous singer?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/William of Blois (poet)
 * Comment: Was moved from a user sandbox to main space on May 5

Created by Cullen328 (talk), Wasted Time R (talk). Nominated by Wasted Time R (talk) at 11:14, 10 May 2013 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg Length good, move date good. Great little article here. Not seeing any major issues, spotcheck done for paraphrasing.  However, I had to read the hook twice to figure out what is being said - the phrasing is a little off.  How about ALT 1: that both its sculptor and a famous singer painted political slogans on San Francisco's Vaillancourt Fountain?  Either that, or scratch the "which had to be removed" clause from the original. (I think it's assumed that slogans painted on public art would have to be removed)  The Interior  (Talk) 22:03, 19 May 2013 (UTC)


 * I recommend ALT 1 with "graffiti" rather than "slogans".  Cullen 328 Let's discuss it  01:35, 20 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg for ALT 1: ... that both its sculptor and a famous singer painted political graffiti on San Francisco's Vaillancourt Fountain? The Interior  (Talk) 01:57, 20 May 2013 (UTC)