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Valley National Bank of Arizona

 * ... that Valley National Bank of Arizona employed a full-time art curator to manage the art displayed at all of its 200 bank branches?
 * Reviewed: Meat Atlas
 * Comment: Second DYK nomination (first is still awaiting a decision).

Created by Raymie (talk). Self nominated at 19:56, 26 January 2014 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg Long enough, new enough, no copyvio or close paraphrasing found on the sources I checked. Enough references, but they need to be fuller, with retrieved dates and online links where possible. And "Retrieved March 31, 2013" doesn't make much sense for an article just created. The hook is good, but could be more concise: ... that Valley National Bank of Arizona employed a full-time curator to manage the art displayed at its 200 branches?".  Edwardx (talk) 21:01, 29 January 2014 (UTC)


 * I like the modified version of your hook. Also:
 * The "March 31" is retrieved by a template for calculating inflation, Template:Inflation/fn, which inserts that.
 * Most of the offline articles are not available online (I got them through a database from my public library). In addition, access dates do not show with unless a link is given. Raymie (t • c) 00:47, 30 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Thanks for your prompt attention. All looks good to me now. Edwardx (talk) 09:16, 30 January 2014 (UTC)