Template:Did you know nominations/Willem Pleyte, Cornelis Marinus Pleyte, Ethnographic Museum Artis

Willem Pleyte, Cornelis Marinus Pleyte, Ethnographic Museum Artis
Created/expanded by Rosiestep (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 02:46, 29 October 2012 (UTC)
 * ... that Egyptologist Willem Pleyte (pictured) and his son, Cornelis Pleyte, curator of Ethnographic Museum Artis, served on the board of Brill?


 * Added an image from the article Willem Pleyte posted on DYK on 27th Oct.-- Nvvchar . 16:43, 4 November 2012 (UTC)

Reviewed Neal Purvis and Robert Wade, Sheikh Badr Cemetery, Holmes County Courthouse (Ohio)
 * Starting review. Yazan (talk) 06:25, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Willem Pleyte: Date, length and sources check out.
 * Cornelis Marinus Pleyte: Date and length check out. However the article is hardly sourced. There is only one inline citation and it is misleading, as it sources only one sentence rather than the rest of the paragraph. Furthermore this source says that he was a director, and it makes a point in differentiating "board members" from "directors". More on hook later.
 * Ethnographic Museum Artis: Date, length and sources check out.
 * Hook: As I said earlier, the hook doesn't seem to be supported by the refs. William was on the board, his son, however, was a director. Do correct me if I'm wrong though, the two are not interchangeable.
 * Symbol question.svg Sourcing for the Cornelios article; hook verification issues. Yazan (talk) 06:32, 24 November 2012 (UTC)


 * I've added refs to the Cornelis article. --Rosiestep (talk) 22:37, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * ALT1: ... that Egyptologist Willem Pleyte (pictured) was the father of, Cornelis Pleyte, curator of the Ethnographic Museum Artis? --Rosiestep (talk) 22:37, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * ALT2: ... that Egyptologist Willem Pleyte (pictured), and his son, Cornelis Pleyte, an ethnographic museum curator, were associated with Brill? --Rosiestep (talk) 22:37, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

Looks fine to me - date, length, sourcing, copyright, hook etc. All hooks are o.k. but I am inclined to favor ALT1. I don't see that "brill" is really going to catch anyone's attention, and ALT1 is shortest. Aymatth2 (talk) 01:35, 26 November 2012 (UTC)