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Yaxha

 * ... that Yaxha, the third largest Maya ruin in Guatemala, is one of very few Maya cities to have built a twin pyramid complex, an architectural arrangement characteristic of Tikal?
 * Reviewed: Thor amboinensis
 * Comment: QPQ review to follow. Plenty of possible hooks in this article if the above doesn't appeal. 5x expansion.

Created/expanded by Simon Burchell (talk). Self nom at 11:48, 16 October 2012 (UTC)


 * An interesting and pretty comprehensive article. Date and length are fine, and the sourcing is of high quality. Well illustrated and written. A few points that need to be addressed before I sign it off: the "Location" section needs more sourcing (the last 3 sentences have no source). Also, the lead should really be a bit more comprehensive to meet the requirements of WP:LEAD. The hook is mostly OK, but "almost unique" is a tautology; something is either unique or it isn't. How about "only seen elsewhere in...", or something like that? Finally, the QPQ needs to be done. Prioryman (talk) 21:56, 16 October 2012 (UTC)
 * I've cut the unsourced info (a relic of the pre-expansion article), even without it it's still over 5x, and I've rephrased the hook. I'll sort out the lead and the review when I have a bit more time - hopefully tomorrow. Thanks for the review, Simon Burchell (talk) 22:53, 16 October 2012 (UTC)
 * All should be OK now, expanded the intro - just need to do that review! Simon Burchell (talk) 08:17, 17 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Symbol redirect vote4.png Needs a review. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:01, 28 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Sorry, I'd forgotten about this. With the improved intro, the rewording and the QPQ review done, we're good to go now. Prioryman (talk) 08:34, 28 October 2012 (UTC)