Template:Did you know nominations/York City War Memorial


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The result was: promoted by Montanabw (talk) 21:56, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

York City War Memorial, North Eastern Railway War Memorial

 * ... that controversy enveloped the North Eastern Railway War Memorial and the York City War Memorial (pictured) after the latter was given a tenth of the former's budget?


 * ALT1:that Sir Edwin Lutyens designed both the North Eastern Railway War Memorial and the York City War Memorial (pictured) after a controversy surrounding their comparative size?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Operation Phoutah, Template:Did you know nominations/William Grant, Lord Grant

Created by HJ Mitchell (talk). Self-nominated at 23:11, 10 February 2016 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg Articles are both new enough, long enough and within policy. They are well-written and informative.  Both rely heavily on a single source which is accepted on good faith; basic details are confirmed by the Heritage England sources.  Ideally some additional sources would be consulted, but this is not necessary for DYK.
 * Both hooks are confusing for the general reader as it isn't obvious that the two memorials were to be located close to each other. I suggest something along the lines of ALT2: "...that Sir Edwin Lutyens' York City War Memorial (pictured) is just 100 yd from his North Eastern Railway War Memorial, built with ten times the budget?"  Other suggestions are welcome.
 * The picture is clear at small size and illustrates the hook well. I've added (pictured) to the proposed hooks
 * QPQ has been completed. Warofdreams talk 15:45, 26 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I'm not sure that they're confusing but your proposed alternative works fine as well as or instead of my two suggestions. HJ Mitchell  &#124;  Penny for your thoughts?  20:29, 26 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Great, Symbol confirmed.svg for ALT2. Warofdreams talk 19:40, 27 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Symbol question.svg Please be wary of introducing new facts to hooks without requesting for a second opinion to validate it. I tried to check the claim myself before quickly promoting it. Unfortunately, there was no inline citation at the end of the sentence containing the claimed 90 m distance in either article.  Jolly  Ω   Janner  09:00, 28 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Actually they're not 90 metres apart; 90 metres relates to the distance between the NER memorial and the original proposed site for the city memorial, but the location was changed during the planning process. Frankly, I don't see the problem with my first proposed hook. Nonetheless, how about:
 * ALT3...that the North Eastern Railway War Memorial and the York City War Memorial (pictured) were built by Sir Edwin Lutyens on opposite sides if the city walls?
 * ALT4...that the York City War Memorial (pictured) was built on land donated by the North Eastern Railway, who also built their own war memorial in York?
 * Both of those are in the article and sourced, even if they sort of miss the point in that the controversy is the reason there are ~3500 words to write about these memorials. HJ Mitchell  &#124;  Penny for your thoughts?  13:19, 28 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Symbol voting keep.svg ALT4 would work, I feel. The rest of the articles check out as per Warofdreams's review. —♦♦ AMBER  (ЯʘCK)  20:17, 8 March 2016 (UTC)