Template:Did you know nominations/Zézé


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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 10:56, 3 April 2015 (UTC)

Zézé

 * ... that Zézé was the first-ever Brazilian player in the Bundesliga but left when he was diagnosed with a snow allergy?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/HMAS Mildura

Created by Calistemon (talk). Self nominated at 12:17, 28 March 2015 (UTC).



Everything looks good except that the hook says he was the first Brazilian player in the Bundesliga but the article says another Brazilian had already scored in the Bundesliga. Problem there. Aside from that, looks good to me. Long enough, authorship, prose, interesting, not plagiarized, though it could do with a bit of copyediting before it hits the main page.--Wehwalt (talk) 17:06, 28 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Easily explained: Zézé made his Bundesliga debut in August 1964 but did not score until March 1965. Tagliari made his Bundesliga debut in November 1964, three month later but scored in this game, five month before Zézé first scored. As to the copy edit, I agree. If somebody could have a look over the article it would be appreciated. Calistemon (talk) 19:53, 28 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Fair enough.--Wehwalt (talk) 20:14, 28 March 2015 (UTC)