Template talk:Did you know/2003 Aceh New Years' Eve bombing

2003 Aceh New Years' Eve bombing
Created by Rowboatcop (talk). Cleaned up by Crisco 1492 (talk) at 13:39, 24 July 2011 (UTC)
 * ... that 2003 ended with a terrorist attack?
 * I'm going to be sacrificed to Wiki-Tan for this, but here's another. ALT1 ... that 2003 ended with a bang?


 * ALT2: ... that the perpetrators of a a terrorist attack in Aceh on New Year's Eve 2003 are still unknown? Gatoclass (talk) 03:51, 15 August 2011 (UTC)

Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

Hook
 * Length, format, content rules:All good.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:41, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Source: WP:RS--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:34, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Interest: Low interest level, in my opinion. Tony   (talk)  02:14, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Image suitability:NA--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:34, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
 * ALT hooks, if proposed: ALT1 withdrawn--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:42, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

Article
 * Length: 2400 chars--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:37, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Vintage: created July 24, 2011--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:37, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): All WP:RS. --TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:40, 9 August 2011 (UTC) Source number 1 not loading. Possibly dead.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:49, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Neutrality:Check.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:49, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Plagiarism/close paraphrasing:Needs some work.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:51, 9 August 2011 (UTC) Looks good now.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:58, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Copyvio: Looks good.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:01, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting:It's a good basic start/stub class article.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:03, 14 August 2011 (UTC)

Comments/discussion:
 * Review to follow. Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:39, 24 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Reviewed: Indian cricket team in England in 2011 (diff) Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:43, 24 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Definitely not Alt1. Maybe the original hook but I agree with Tony1 here, it's low interest. What makes this attack stand out? PanydThe muffin is not subtle 20:15, 5 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Doesn't seem to have any truly unique characteristics except for when it happened (like 5 hours before then end of 2003). Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:41, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
 * I think any terrorism that results in 9 actual deaths is notable and this is recent enough that some main page viewers may remember it.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 22:39, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Ref 1 is not loading for me either. Any specific concerns on regarding paraphrasing? Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:37, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
 * "It was the deadliest bombing in Aceh since the government abandoned a six-month truce on May 19 and began a military offensive against the rebels" is what the source says and almost exactly what this says, for starters.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:04, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Completely rewritten. Should we change this to a self nom? Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:09, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Good job.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:00, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
 * You could change it I guess. I am not sure about that issue, but it seems to me that you are now a key editorial contributor.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:00, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Done. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:31, 14 August 2011 (UTC)


 * The original hook is far too vague, so I've struck it and added an alt. Gatoclass (talk) 03:51, 15 August 2011 (UTC)
 * ALT2 is nice. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:21, 15 August 2011 (UTC)