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Batara Kala

 * ... that in Javanese mythology, eclipses are caused by Batara Kala (pictured) trying to devour either the Sun or Moon?
 * Reviewed: If you reviewed another article before listing this DYK nomination, put it here
 * Comment: please proofread as I am not a native English speker

Created/expanded by Awewe (talk). Self nom at 02:44, 1 August 2011 (UTC) Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

Hook
 * Length, format, content rules: Symbol confirmed.svg --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Source: Pictogram voting keep.svg --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Interest: Symbol confirmed.svg --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Image suitability, if applicable: Symbol confirmed.svg
 * ALT hooks, if proposed:
 * ALT1: ... that according to some legends, Batara Kala was conceived when a fish swallowed Shiva's sperm?

Article
 * Length: Symbol confirmed.svg --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Vintage:Symbol confirmed.svg --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): Symbol question.svg Has several unsourced sentences, and the book by John Emigh does not fully support the text it is cited for --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Neutrality: Symbol confirmed.svg --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: Symbol confirmed.svg --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Copyvio: Symbol confirmed.svg --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting: Symbol confirmed.svg --Epipelagic (talk) 08:18, 3 August 2011 (UTC)

Comments/discussion:
 * To reviewer: Please note that DYK Check does not show a 5x expansion because of this vandalised version. Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:38, 1 August 2011 (UTC)
 * I've also taken the liberty of fixing the hook a little (grammar) Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:47, 1 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Symbol question.svg General sourcing needs more attention --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
 * How's this? Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:46, 2 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Okay to go --Epipelagic (talk) 08:17, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Suggested another ALT. Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:23, 5 August 2011 (UTC)