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Battle of Pakchon

 * ... that although the 3rd Battalion, Royal Australian Regiment halted the advancing Chinese 117th Division during the Battle of Pakchon (5 November 1950), the inexperienced Australian battalion commander was later relieved of his position?
 * Reviewed: Roscoe Charles Wilson (http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Template_talk%3ADid_you_know%2FRoscoe_C._Wilson&action=historysubmit&diff=444405352&oldid=444099540)

5x expanded by Anotherclown (talk). Self nom at 04:54, 7 August 2011 (UTC)

Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

Hook
 * Length, format, content rules – OK Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 21:39, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Source – AGF Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 21:39, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Interest –
 * Image suitability, if applicable – OK Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 10:55, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * ALT hooks, if proposed –

Article
 * Length – OK Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 21:35, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Vintage – Nice expansion. Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 21:35, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Sourcing (V, RS, BLP) – OK Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 10:54, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Neutrality – OK. Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 21:35, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Plagiarism/close paraphrasing – no evidence Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 10:54, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * copyvio (files) – OK Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 10:54, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting –

Comments/discussion:

It looks good, but I will continue my reviewing. The article is really long. Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 21:40, 10 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Looks good. Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 10:54, 12 August 2011 (UTC)