Template talk:Did you know/Brownie Mary

Brownie Mary

 * ... that the arrest of Brownie Mary led to one of the first clinical trials studying the effects of cannabinoids in HIV-infected adults?
 * Reviewed: Tatanua mask, Sydney Harris
 * Comment: Five-times expanded from user subpage

5x expanded by Viriditas (talk). Self nom at 15:20, 30 July 2011 (UTC) Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

Hook
 * Length, format, content rules: Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:59, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Source: Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:59, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Interest: Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:59, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Image suitability, if applicable: None. Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:59, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * ALT hooks, if proposed:
 * ALT1: ... that the arrest of Brownie Mary led to one of the first clinical trials studying the effects of cannabinoids in HIV-infected adults?

Article
 * Length: Previous version included a copyvio. Nixing the copyvio, 5x checks out. Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:59, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Vintage: 12:59, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): Whoa... yes. Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:59, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Neutrality: Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:59, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: Looks fine. Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:59, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Copyvio: Images are fine. Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:59, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting:

Comments/discussion:
 * I tweaked a link (just to avoid a redirect) and also changed the piped wikilink. 03:54, 8 August 2011 (UTC)Neutralitytalk
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Everything checks out. Nice expansion! Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:59, 8 August 2011 (UTC)