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Contents of the United States diplomatic cables leak (Philippines)

 * ... that leaks from diplomatic cables show a Halloween costume party hosted by a Saudi Arabian prince hired Filipino bartenders?
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Created/expanded by TheMoth&TheButterfly (talk). Self nom at 19:07, 31 July 2011 (UTC) Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

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 * Length, format, content rules: Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:39, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Source: Cited. (Love MSNBC's headline) Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:39, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Interest: Wild... party? Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:39, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Image suitability, if applicable: None. Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:39, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * ALT hooks, if proposed:

Article
 * Length: Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:39, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Vintage: Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:39, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): Look reliable. Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:39, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Neutrality: Somewhat. Would be nice to have information about what the government thought. Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:39, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: Not good. This shows some major copy-and-paste action. Other sources are the same. Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:39, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Copyvio: No images. Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:39, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting:
 * Needs a rewrite to give it an encyclopedic tone. Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:39, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

Comments/discussion:
 * Symbol delete vote.svg Article needs a total rewrite to eliminate close paraphrasing and address tone issues. Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:39, 12 August 2011 (UTC)