Template talk:Did you know/David Dunwoodie

David Dunwoodie

 * ... that David Dunwoodie was an Ice Dog twice?
 * ALT1: ... that David Dunwoodie had two seperate runs with the Ice Dogs?
 * ALT2: ... that although the Ice Dogs traded David Dunwoodie, he returned several seasons later?  Rcej (Robert) –  talk  02:56, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Reviewed: Stereum sanguinolentum

Created by Salavat (talk). Nominated by Rcej (talk) at 09:07, 31 July 2011 (UTC) Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

Hook
 * Length, format, content rules: Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Source: Both stints are cited, but we should have the conclusion in the lead to make it more apparent. Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Interest: Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Image suitability, if applicable: None. Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * ALT hooks, if proposed:

Article
 * Length: Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Vintage: Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Neutrality: Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: No problems. Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Copyvio: No images. Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting:

Comments/discussion:
 * Symbol question.svg Small matter of the hook fact being stated more directly and then we are set. Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Proposed alt hooks :) Thx for reviewing!  Rcej (Robert) –  talk  02:56, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg You're welcome. ALT1 looks better, takes less reading between the lines. Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:49, 13 August 2011 (UTC)