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E.R. Shipp

 * ... that the congregation of her church was outraged when E.R. Shipp criticized her pastor in print, but he led them in a standing ovation when she won the Pulitzer Prize for Commentary?

Created/expanded by Gamaliel (talk). Self nom at 17:03, 9 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Hook: Length is rather long (not over the limit), interest is okay. How about ALT1: ... that E.R. Shipp has not grown into her name yet? or something similar.
 * To shorten it, perhaps lop off the "for Commentary"? Gamaliel (talk) 12:37, 19 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Sounds good. Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:49, 19 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Article: Length and date are fine. Article should probably be sectioned soon, although it's okay for now. AGF on offline sources.
 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Looks okay, AGF on the heavily cited offline source. Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:36, 19 August 2011 (UTC)