Template talk:Did you know/Hartington City Hall and Auditorium

Hartington City Hall and Auditorium

 * ... that the Hartington City Hall and Auditorium is a Prairie School design built at a time (1921–23) when the Prairie School was in decline and "stands as a progressive building in an otherwise conservative community"?

Created by Frankie Rae (talk), Ammodramus (talk). Self nom at 03:03, 7 August 2011 (UTC)

Well-written and well-sourced. The hook is supported by both online and offline sources. Free image. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 04:20, 7 August 2011 (UTC) Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

Hook
 * Length, format, content rules – See below
 * Source – — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 22:15, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Interest – — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 22:15, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Image suitability, if applicable – — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 22:15, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * ALT hooks, if proposed –

Article
 * Length – — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 22:15, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Vintage – — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 22:15, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Sourcing (V, RS, BLP) – — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 22:15, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Neutrality – — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 22:15, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Plagiarism/close paraphrasing – None that I could see. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 22:15, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * copyvio (files) – — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 22:15, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting – — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 22:15, 7 August 2011 (UTC)

Comments/discussion: Hook is over the limit at 215 letters. Also missing the phrase (pictured).


 * How about this hook instead?
 * ... that the Hartington City Hall and Auditorium (pictured) is a Prairie School design built when that style was in decline and "stands as a progressive building in an otherwise conservative community"?
 * ... or does the ellipsis count in the characters as well? Thanks!
 * --Frankie Rae (talk) 23:08, 7 August 2011 (UTC)


 * This is my first time reviewing a DYK, so I don't know about the ellipsis. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 23:19, 7 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Well, that's only fair: it's my first DYK nomination. Thanks! --Frankie Rae (talk) 23:27, 7 August 2011 (UTC)


 * If the ellipsis counts, then perhaps:
 * ... that the Hartington City Hall and Auditorium (pictured), a Prairie School design built when that style was in decline, "stands as a progressive building in an otherwise conservative community"?
 * --Frankie Rae (talk) 01:32, 8 August 2011 (UTC)


 * I see in Did you know/Additional rules that the ellipsis doesn't count. As a result, I would prefer to use the middle hook rather than the last one. --Frankie Rae (talk) 19:30, 8 August 2011 (UTC)