Template talk:Did you know/Helen Magnus

Helen Magnus

 * ... that actress Amanda Tapping portrays Helen Magnus, the series protagonist of Sanctuary, after she was encouraged to move on from playing Samantha Carter in Stargate for eleven years?

Created by Matthew R Dunn (talk). Self nom at 15:54, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Hook: I have reworded it so it parses better. Length and interest factor checks out. Hook fact is not stated directly in the article text (not counting captions or the lead), and is still uncited.
 * Article: Length, date, referencing, copyright of images and paraphrasing check out.
 * Summary:Symbol question.svg Please cite the hook fact directly. Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:46, 16 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Would it be okay to reword the hook to one that is cited? Like metioning that Tapping was encouraged to move on from Stargate? -- Matthew RD 16:09, 16 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Also, "eleven years ago", implies Tapping played Carter since 2000, where in fact it was 1997, fourteen years ago, until 2008. -- Matthew RD 00:31, 17 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Rewording the hook would be fine. Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:43, 17 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Reworded it. Please let me know if there is still a problem. -- Matthew RD 16:38, 17 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Reworded it. Please let me know if there is still a problem. -- Matthew RD 16:38, 17 August 2011 (UTC)